Before you read, please note that these are first draft, sample excerpts. They have not been edited or enhanced with a second look as of yet, and are literally the original drafts, completely untouched. As such, there is limited figurative language, description, etc. So, I ask you to keep an open mind, because this is “as bad as it gets” in terms of the writing quality, so expect the final version to be WAY better. I have placed them here for enjoyment and hopefully intrigue. Over time, more will be added. Happy reading!

FotS: Book One

Prologue: Part 1 (first draft)

Prologue: Part 2 (first draft)

Chapter 1: Part 1 (first draft)

Chapter 1: Part 2 (first draft)

Chapter 1: Part 3 (first draft)

Start of Chapter 4: First look at Innis (first draft)

Start of Chapter 7: First look at Rees (first draft)

Chapter 21: Part 1: First look at Cirrus (first draft)

Chapter 21: Part 2 (first draft)

Chapter 21: Part 3 (first draft)

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