A steady flow of good writing, meaningful dialogue, and great action is what makes any book worth reading. In fantasy, action scenes are full of combat and I for one, love it. This world of FOTS is full of life and death. In times of serious conflict, decisions and deeds of people have huge impacts on the present and future. I also believe some of the most pure, beautiful moments of life are possible only when they are surrounded by struggle and death. That is what I want readers to feel. I want them to cheer on their favourite characters as they rush into battle and share in the one-of-a-kind feeling that is glorious victory. I want them to be worried for them when times get rough, when the odds are stacked against them. And then at those rare and special human moments, I want them to be truly moved by someone’s last words, a sacrifice, a friend saying farewell, etc.

Well, enough with all that sappy talk. What will war be like in this story? I think I’ve given you a fairly good idea so far. War in this world is old-school. Men (and sometimes women too) stand in rectangular box formations with spears, shields, and short swords in their arsenal. It is what you would find in ancient Greece, Rome, etc. There are some distinct fighting styles used, however. If you haven’t read my Races post yet, I’m about to reference the three races I mentioned there.

First off, we have the mainlanders. These five nations use similar tactics and weapons. Their standard soldiers are hoplite footmen, armoured with a shield, a spear, and a short sword at the hip for when formations break, packed into phalanxes. Units vary from light, heavy, archer, scout, etc. The differences between armies are subtle preferences in weapon choices, tactics, command structure, and unit focus. By that last item, using an example, one nation uses heavier, better armour while another oppositely focuses on speed with smaller shields and hybrid ranged units.

That second race of people I mentioned in RACES are as unique in their military ways from the other mainlanders as they are different from a moral standpoint. Their focus for wars is all out attack. They will strike until the front lines have been forcibly moved to the back of their enemy’s borders, leaving them utterly destroyed (well, that is the plan at least). Their weaponry reflects this strategy: no shields. They choose to use the Macedonian phalanx, however, their spears are not quite as long and are tipped with a blade, making it resemble something like a longer, pointier, two-handed naginata, capable of use in one-on-one situations if need be. Their training starts from a young age and is brutal compared to their neighbours’. Taking all these things into account, then adding the fact that their army population is far larger than any other one nation’s, you can start to see how they might be an enemy worth avoiding, if possible.

The third race’s style of war is something truly special. As I noted, they have been at war almost continuously for a long time, some one-and-a-half thousand years, actually. These are people whose way of life has been surrounded by war for so long, that with the aid of their passionate and gifted racial nature, it has become a sophisticated thing. However, this race is new to the mainland and are susceptible to confusion, even frustration with encountering new ways, as being so secluded in the past, their way of life has made them rely on a balance, a balance that has no meaning on the main continent. Their wars amongst themselves are bloodbaths and clashes of blinding speed and skill that are governed by an unwritten code. Both sides have a unique form of ‘elite’ soldiers. One prefers a larger special unit of talented warriors, which I’ll call ‘The Selects’ for now. They vaguely resemble the Immortals of Persia if you need a mental image, but to be honest they are way different. The other has a ‘pantheon’ of extremely gifted fighters, let’s call them ‘The Lieutenants’. They are numbered 1-11, the order changing only when one falls in battle. Each of these special groups serve as officers in combat, some even advisers to their respective Kings. There is also a far larger range of weaponry with this race as each soldier uses whatever they choose to use, whatever they’re best with. There are even a few smaller groups of soldiers who fight together in unison. Battlefield knowledge, or ‘feel’ is pretty much in-bred, and with their great talent in mind, this style of theirs gives them both advantages and disadvantages. They are impossible to predict and difficult to bring down, but might they find trouble dealing with organized ranks of greater numbers? Hmmm…

These odd customs are a source of significant intimidation to the mainlanders. Imagine a people who actually ‘love’ battle more than anything, and when you look across the front lines you see some of your opponents smiling with joy. Oh yeah, they’re more talented killers than you are too, and you know it. Yikes. And remember that these are not brutes, they are a fair and elegant people. This all creates a common fear amongst the mainlanders that begs the question, “how do we deal with them/could we stop them even if we wanted?”

© 2013 FOTS Fantasy


  1. Very nice post. I look forward to more glances into this world. Well done

    1. Thanks Len. More to come don’t you worry. Keep up the good work.

  2. The imagery you keep evoking with your posts is truly incredible. I cannot wait to line up in a bookshop to purchase it (or buy it from amazon if you decide on digital publishing…)

    1. Thanks again for the high praise. You will have to wait a while, but if that day comes, you won’t have to buy anything, I’ll send you one!

Have your say

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

Low Elo Life

Real tips for the largest group in League

The Dark Prince Quintet

A blog dedicated to the development of books in The Dark Prince series

The Lair of Nate

Thoughts Sculpted Into Words

D. James Fortescue

Chasing dreams!

The Writing Corp

Official Writing Tips, Inspiration and Hacks

The War of Memory Project

Project diary for a fantasy series in the works.

Fabulous Realms

Worlds of Fantasy, Folklore, Myth and Legend


Blog of artist Dean Scheppel

Plotting Bunnies

Words are oxygen

H L Petrovic

@ High Fantasy Addict. Fantasy Writer

I Make Stories

The Blog of Author K. M. Alexander

Top 10 of Anything and Everything - The Fun Top Ten Blog

Animals, Gift Ideas, Travel, Books, Recycling Ideas and Many, Many More

FOTS Fantasy

Fragments of a vast new world, the writing journey, and book reviews.

Travel Monkey

The Adventures of Kongo

Auston Habershaw

Fantasy Author, Creator of Worlds Fantastic

Story Tips

Get Published


Write Your Own Story

%d bloggers like this: